7/21/14

Monday Night Write: "Mine"



Mine

From a writing prompt on reddit.com:


http://www.reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/comments/2ay1j0/wp_on_his_deathbed_your_father_confesses_that/


I wasn't sure if it was the drugs playing tricks on his already failing mind or if there is any truth to his claims, but in his last moments, my father told me what he said was his biggest secret. Lets get a few things straight here before I tell the story; My father was a hard man. He worked hard and took no guff from anyone. He has always hated science fiction for as long as I can remember, and he has always said that truth should never be compromised, so when he swore to me that this actually happened, I believe that true or not, he actually believed it. These are his words, transcribed from my phone that was recording the conversation.


“You know I am not crazy right!”
“Yes dad, I know.”
“I have to tell you the truth! Nothing else matters.”
“It’s OK dad, there is no need to get ups-”
“YES THERE IS! You don't remember what happened but I do! Every night for the last 35 years I have relived it. Every night.. that face.. [He falls into a coughing fit here.]
“You OK? Need me to get a nurse? [I stood up to get help but he grabbed my wrist and drew me close to him]
“I don’t know how it got in, but when I heard you crying I came out and saw something huge and dark standing over your crib.” [Coughing] I didn't know what to do! I am so sorry. [Sobbing] I am so sorry David. I was so afraid… I could hear its voice in my head, asking questions… seeing my memories. I….” [He was quiet here for a long moment]
“Dad? [Pause] Dad, its ok. I’m here, and I am ok.”
“It spoke to me.”
“What?”
“The thing, it spoke to me.”
“What did it say?”
“Mine…”
“Mine?”
“Mine! And then he reached down and picked you up... It was in my head David. It hurt, I tried so hard to…” [Here he mumbled for a while, what sounds like gibberish. His eyes were focused on nothing and I had to shake him to get him back to reality.]
“Dad?... Dad, you OK?”
“I killed it!” It was in my head… It had you. I killed it. I killed it. I killed it. I killed it.”
“What?”
“Hunting rifle….. by the door. Shot it in the back.”
[I was silent at this point because I honestly had no clue how to respond. He look at me, and then turned his face away after a few moments.]
“I’m not crazy. I know what I saw.”
“I believe you dad. I don’t know why, but I believe you.”
“it… it’s still out there.”
“I thought you said you killed it?”
“I did. Buried it by the old fallen pine.”
[He had another coughing fit and then we just sat there for a few minutes, and then he seemed to compose himself a little better]
“I went back out there a few years later, convinced I was crazy. I needed to see it. I could still see it in my head, feel it poking around, but I honestly thought I was losing my mind or something. It wasn’t there anymore, but the rug I wrapped it in was, and it was still stained with blood.”
“Dad...I… I don’t know what to say”
“I heard more….”
“More what?”
“ I don’t know what it was David. Maybe it was bigfoot, or aliens... or something something else, I dont know… but I swear to God Almighty that when I was filling in the hole, I heard noises in the woods… words. I don’t know what they were, but I could hear them talking…. so I ran. I ran as fast as I could and never went back. That was the year we sold the cabin.”
“Wow.”
[He laughed]
“You’re damned right wow!”


[A few more coughs and then he held his hand out and dropped an old rusted bullet casing into my hands]
“I think…. I might sleep for a while now.”
“OK dad.”
“Stay with me David?”
“Ok dad.”

He fell asleep, and shortly after passed away in his sleep. I have not decided yet if I want to go up to the woods and look for the hole with the carpet, it its even still there… I don’t know if my dad was all there when he told me that story, but what I do know is the last 50 years, there have been more instances of missing hikers, children, and kidnapped babies than any other wooded area for about 700 miles. Maybe I will go up there some day… but if I do, you can bet I will be bringing my dad’s old hunting rifle with me!

6/23/14

Monday Night Write: "Smile, you are going to war"

http://www.reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/comments/28w6ve/ip_smile_you_are_going_to_war/
Image Prompt

All anyone talks about now-a-days is war. Not “a” war or “the” war, but just war in general. To tell you truth, I don’t think I can take it. They have had us juicing up with these drugs that make us crave war, to crave that battlefield experience, and I think they… whoever “they” is now, have been putting it in the water or something too. I stopped taking my dose about 1 week ago, and I regret every moment of it. There is no happiness for me outside of war. There is no hope. I look around and all I see is this new drug for this or that, and people watching the daily war feeds, or old war movies. I fear one day we are going to reach a tipping point, where we do not have enough enemies to fight, and begin to kill ourselves. And maybe we deserve it. I can see the faces of the innocent that I have killed. I can remember the ecstasy I felt with every life I took, but where are those feelings now? In the water or in the pills? Maybe I should take my “medicine” and be happy. “Smile, you are going to war!” they say, and then put the needle in your neck. But at least it’s better than the pain. The guilt. Maybe this time, I will take a lead pill, and smile, because the war, for me anyway, is finally over.

6/17/14

Monday Night Write: "Anonymous Cowboy"





Since the untimely death of her husband just six months ago, Sue-Ann Beasley had been trying her best to keep her ranch in order, despite the men that the bank had kept sending out to pressure her to sell. She knew that the wealthy folk were all in cahoots and wanted to get her off this land so they could build their precious railroad through her property, but she couldn’t accept any of their offers. Her husband had worked hard to buy this land, and she would honor his memory and keep working until her son was old enough to take over, or she could start profiting enough to hire some ranch-hands.
The night that she met the cowboy will not quickly fade from her mind. She was fast asleep when the sound of panicked horses and men shouting woke her. She bolted up and ran to the window to see that her barn was on fire, and men were riding around it throwing torches and lamps. Afraid for her son in the crib next to her bed, Sue grabbed the rifle she kept next to her night-stand and took aim out the window. She was about to fire at the first man to enter her sights when something hit her on the back of the head sending out tendrils of cold flame though her body, and she felt herself hit the floor.  


“No, please,” she tried saying, but the words were slurred. In that moment, she knew. The banks had won. Her land was lost, and now, quite possibly her life and the life of her son for all she knew.


“Please, not my boy,” she said again, strength returning to her voice, and she slowly tried to push herself up.


“You done waited too long,” a chew laden voice said through a chuckle, and then pain returned to the back of her head as someone grabbed her head and started pulling her out of the room.


The men outside became even more exuberant when they saw their leader had pulled Sue outside.


“First we-unna gonna kill yer boy,” The man said letting go of Sue’s hair and snapping fingers towards the house she was just taken from. Two men threw their oil lamps into the windows and fire immediately exploded throughout the house. Sue screamed in pure agony that only a mother’s heart could experience, but a hand slapped her across the face, stunning her and smothering the scream. She could could feel the man’s mouth next to her ear and he kneeled down to her, his chuckle growing in his voice.


“And while that little piss is burnin and squealing like a stuck pig, we gonna take you…”


He started ripping the bottom of her nightgown, a low guttural sound filling his throat.


“... until we alllllll had our fill.” He let out another growl and his leathery hands began to slowly writhe around her body like a serpent. This made the men only become more excited and they began hollering like indians and making their way towards her.


She tried to push them away, tried to stop them, but any single one of them was stronger than she was. She screamed and thrashed, and cried for her son, but it was hopeless.


“Please!” she screamed, over and over. “Please!”


But no voice answered her. Instead, she heard the report of someone firing from outside the light of the fire which was now engulfing both buildings. The man who had begun to hold her left arm down suddenly twitched as a splatter of something hot and metallic tasting spattered across her face, and then he slumped over, his grip on her arm slacking.


Then she heard a second report, and a third. After a moment, she had lost count, and the men who were holding her down had either been shot, or were scattering for cover. All except the big burly man who had pulled her out of the house, and who now held her in front of himself with his pistol pressed firmly to the side of her head. Then the shooting stopped and all that could be heard over the roar of the fire were the whispered shouts of the remaining men, and the jangling of spurts, hoofs slowly padding across the earth, and the creak of a saddle.


“Quiet!” the man hissed to his men, and they all stared into the darkness as a black from atop a horse slowly rode up. He stopped just outside of the light’s ability to show his features, save for the sheen in his eyes and silhouette of his hat. He just sat there for a full minute, shrouded with shadow and an unnerving silence. Then, with a casual grace, he dismounted and gave the horse a pat on the rear causing it to walk back into the darkness.


“Partner, yud best turn back around and get if you know what's good fer ya.”


The sheen spread to the shadowed man’s mouth as the light from the fires played on his teeth, and he took a step forward. One of the men in hiding stood and raised his rifle to shoot the newcomer, but the shadowed cowboy’s hands flew to his holstered pistol and back up with supernatural speed, firing a single bullet that hit the raider right above his nose. He fell down, dead, his rifle having never been shot. The echos of the gunshot resounded for a short moment, and then all the remaining men stood and began firing.


Still walking slowly towards them, the cowboy, by which the firelight could now confirm, pulled his second pistol out, and began firing in return. To Sue, it seemed his arms were controlling themselves, as he walked towards them, his eyes remaining on hers.


It only took a few moments, but in that short time, the cowboy had dispatched all the men except for Sue’s captor, and had not a scratch to show for it.


“I’ll kill`er” the burly man spat. “Stop right there or i’ll put a new hole in`er head!”


The cowboy stopped.


“Throw em!” the man commanded, but the cowboy just stood there. “Throw em on the ground!” the man bellowed, motioning towards the earth with his pistol. Thats when the cowboy stuck. With a single lighting fast reaction, his hand flew to his pistol, and from the hip, shot the other man’s pistol right from his grip, taking a portion of his index finger with it.


Sue followed the cowboy’s lead, and tore away from the man’s other arm in his moment of shock. She flung herself towards the cowboy, but stopped just outside of his reach.


“Wait!” the bleeding man said, desperation in his voice. “Wait! Don’t kill me! I have information. I have gold. Just wait!”


The cowboy glanced at Sue as if asking her permission. She took a moment to compose herself and then spoke to the cowboy.
“Thank you.”
A shallow nod was his only reply.
“Please, wait…” the man droned on.
“Let me talk to him?” Sue asked.
Another nod.
She walked back over to the man, now clutching his bloody hand, and she withdrew his second revolver from its holster and she aimed it at his head.
“Gold.” she stated flatly.
“Yes, yes. take it!” the man said, slowly reaching into his vest and pulling out a small sack and tossed it to the ground at her feet.
“Who?”
“Mr. Applemoore. He needs the land for them rail cars. He-”
Sue abruptly dropped the pistol and fired a round into the man’s knee. He fell to the ground with a cry of shock and pain, and curses began pouring out of his mouth.
“Stupid wench!” the man spat! “At least we killed yer kid!” he taunted in his rage, the pain stifling the laugh he was so desperate to show.
“Roasted him like a hog!”


Sue calmly moved to pistol to her left hand reached down picking up one of the remaining lamps, and threw it at the man’s head. He burst into flames, oil covering his body and aoking into his clothes like a human torch, and he shrieked in outrage and agony.


And then the anguish washed over Sue. She looked to the house where her son had been sleeping, the room now entirely engulfed. She sank to her knees, sobbs welling up from deep inside. She knew the cowboy had moved to stand beside her because of the slight whistle he made, but she didn’t care. Nothing mattered anymore. She wished the the men had just killed her outright.


She felt a strong hand give her shoulder a slight squeeze, and when she looked up, the cowboy was holding a small child wrapped in cloth. She leaped to her feet and took her son from the man, her sobs instantly transformed from the darkest of nights to the brilliant sun of midday.


“How?” she asked through the tears, but the man just smiled.
‘Thank you!” she said, burying her face into the cloth and kissing her son. “Thank you thank you thank you!”


She just sat there for a few minutes reeling from all that just took place. The moans from the burning man had quieted, and when she looked up, the cowboy was back on his horse. He reached up one hand to the brim of his hat, and gave her a nod. Then he tossed her 5 pouches identical to the pouch of gold taken from the gang’s leader.


“Who are you?” she asked.


“Just a cowboy,” the man said, voice thick and low. Then he turned his horse, and began riding out in the same fashion he had arrived.


“Wait?” she called after him, but he just kept on riding, fading into the darkness and out of sight.


“Who’s going to help me if more come?” she yelled.


But the night was now still with the crackle of fire, except for two words that rang out in the dark, cutting the silence like a trumpet.


“I am!”



6/11/14

Reddit Writing Prompt

Ideas from reddit.com/r/writingprompts

http://www.reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/comments/27r178/wp_you_are_flicking_through_channels_bored_on/


“There is never anything good to watch this time of night”, I muttered under my breath. “Just kill me now…” Heh, sarcastic bastard. I hate this time of night, when the rest of the world is asleep and I am awake, as usual. This was the third night in a row when that bitch called slumber stood me up, so here’s to another night watching trash TV with my cheap beer and my wholesome microwave dinner. Yum!
Making my fourth or fifth cycle through the channels, I was really starting to get frustrated; reruns of I love Lucy… pass. Some b.s. about puppies… definitely not. A god-awful cheesy alien movie… dammit, its already half way through! Some fatass just looking at a screen in his living-room… pass. History Channel… fun. I swear, if  I see one more world war 2 documentary-

“What?”  I flipped back to the channel of the man watching TV, and… no. There is no way. How the hell am I on TV. I frantically waved my arms around but my image just sat there, watching the screen, un-moving. I looked closer and could see his…. MY body moving as I was breathing. This had to be prerecorded. I looked to my right to where the camera would have been, but there was nothing there except a blank wall… not even a window where a camera could be.

How does this make sense? He… or I… or whoever the hell that guy was was wearing the exact same thing I was. The same carcass of a TV dinner on the table, and even the same beer can by the TV that I threw at it not more than 5 minutes ago. I would have said that someone was playing a prank on me, except my lack of any social activity left that as a resounding no. Then I saw it. Something black and tall, and vaguely man-like in shape standing behind the man. Behind ME! It was slowing moving from one side of the room to the other. I don’t know why, but I could almost feel the malevolence pouring off whatever that thing was. As it slipped into the shadows, he must have heard it because he turned around with a start… I wanted to yell at him! Its right there in the shadows man!!! But after a few moments he faced towards the TV again and kept just watching.
What in the world was going on! There had to be some rational explanation to what I was watching, but the emotions that it was conjuring were clouding my thoughts. Then, the floorboards behind me creaked. Someone was in here with me… oh God… or something!

I quickly looked behind me, my instincts preparing me haul ass out of there if I saw anything, but the room was empty. I eyed the shadows  an extra moment out of sheer paranoia, but I saw nothing. Man, I needed to get some sleep. When I looked back to the TV, the man was still sitting there but now the dark man-thing was standing right behind him. I nearly yelped out of surprise.

Get up, run, get out of there, hit him, SOMETHING! Don't just stand there. Then the thing reached out its dark arms and slowly wrapped creepy long fingers around the man’s neck, but he didn't move. GET OUT OF THERE FOOL! CANT YOU FEEL HIM TOUCHING YOU! Then the man slumped down, and the screen went to static.

What the hell did I just watch? This isn’t  funny anymore. The last thing I need right now is-

And then something cold slowly started to wrap around my neck. My mind was screaming at me to run but I couldn’t move. This wasn’t real. There is no way this could actually be happening. I just needed sleep. I was starting to hallucinate or something. There is now way…. then….. static.